Sunday, August 30, 2015

Your Fluidity

Do you ever
drip free
I'd love
to get lost
in your
fluidity
Dive into 
the depths
of your
endless
ocean
Lick
the salt
clean
from every
motion
we create

-August 2015
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22 comments:

  1. NatašekAugust 30, 2015 at 12:10 PM

    lovely and intense.

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  2. Donna@LivingFromHappinessAugust 30, 2015 at 1:30 PM

    Oh this just glides on the lips!

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  3. brudbergAugust 30, 2015 at 1:41 PM

    I feel like I'm swimming nude in a moonlit ocean from your word.. wonderful

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    1. TorieSeptember 1, 2015 at 8:53 AM

      Oh, nice! Glad you got such a feeling :) Thanks, Bjorn!!

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  4. Sanaa RizviAugust 30, 2015 at 2:18 PM

    Wow! Love the opening lines.. would be great if we could let ourselves free.. and just go with the flow :D Beautifully executed :D

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  5. KimolisaAugust 30, 2015 at 2:31 PM

    Beautiful imagery and use of words. Thanks for sharing.

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    1. TorieSeptember 1, 2015 at 8:53 AM

      Thank you for visiting and commenting, Kimolisa :)

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  6. MaryAugust 30, 2015 at 4:13 PM

    I really like the sensuality here. Beautifully expressed.

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  7. Sherry Blue SkyAugust 30, 2015 at 5:29 PM

    I love "dive into the depths of your endless ocean."

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  8. ZQAugust 30, 2015 at 5:41 PM

    HMMMM! I do like what you wrote, but, I didn't know what you mean... ignorant me :-(
    ZQ

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    1. TorieSeptember 1, 2015 at 8:56 AM

      Please don't feel ignorant, ZQ! A poem can have so many meanings. And it can mean something different to each person. Just let yourself feel it ;)

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  9. Jae RoseAugust 31, 2015 at 6:03 AM

    I love the fluidity in word and thought so wonderfully echoed and conveyed in this piece

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  10. totomaiAugust 31, 2015 at 3:20 PM

    oh wow - it flows freely, not viscous at all

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  11. Gen Giggles September 1, 2015 at 8:12 AM

    Oh my. Very erotic.

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    1. TorieSeptember 1, 2015 at 8:58 AM

      Haha! Yes, sometimes it goes that way ;) Thanks, GL.

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