Sunday, August 30, 2015

Your Fluidity

Do you ever
drip free
I'd love
to get lost
in your
fluidity
Dive into 
the depths
of your
endless
ocean
Lick
the salt
clean
from every
motion
we create

-August 2015

22 comments:

  1. I feel like I'm swimming nude in a moonlit ocean from your word.. wonderful

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    1. Oh, nice! Glad you got such a feeling :) Thanks, Bjorn!!

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  2. Wow! Love the opening lines.. would be great if we could let ourselves free.. and just go with the flow :D Beautifully executed :D

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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    1. Thank you for your visit, Sanaa :)

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  3. Beautiful imagery and use of words. Thanks for sharing.

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    1. Thank you for visiting and commenting, Kimolisa :)

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  4. I really like the sensuality here. Beautifully expressed.

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  5. I love "dive into the depths of your endless ocean."

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    1. Thank you, Sherry :) Nice to see you!

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  6. HMMMM! I do like what you wrote, but, I didn't know what you mean... ignorant me :-(
    ZQ

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    1. Please don't feel ignorant, ZQ! A poem can have so many meanings. And it can mean something different to each person. Just let yourself feel it ;)

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  7. I love the fluidity in word and thought so wonderfully echoed and conveyed in this piece

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    1. Thank you, Jae Rose! Good to see you ;)

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  8. oh wow - it flows freely, not viscous at all

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    1. Haha! Yes, sometimes it goes that way ;) Thanks, GL.

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