(This is untitled, for now).
I'm weightless
and drifting
through your
plane
Do you feel
my voice
when I call out
your name
I'm shifting
whenever I'm next
to you
Do you feel it
oh, do you feel it
too
I'm melting
whenever you touch
my skin
Open up
your heart
and let me
sink in
Oh, what do you say
let's do it all today
We'll just move
everything
out of our
way
I'm moving
now that I'm
so close
to you
I know
you're moving
I feel it
when you
do
-January 2015
So heartwarming, Torie, just full of love. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Sherry :)
DeleteSuch emotion in this poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kenn!
Deleteha. this has a rather playful rhyme scheme to it...
ReplyDeleteand of course could make for a right fine seduction...ha
Haha! Thanks for your comment, Brian :)
Deletemoving everything out of the way so that there is that closeness we want to have with the other - i don't only read this physically but mentally as well
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind words and for you visit :)
DeleteTo me your words are swaying in a gentle - a song that's whispered in my ears. Beautiful Torie
ReplyDeleteAwww, thank you so much, Bjorn!
Deletepowerful , emotional piece this
ReplyDeleteThank you, SuyashJ :)
DeleteThis sweet love poem lifts me up, Torie. Nice!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Mary!! Smiles to you :)
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