Monday, June 3, 2013

Inhabit

My heart beats
with each breath of you
oh baby,
look what I let you do
to me
I want to melt into you
and become a part of your bones
I want to hollow out your heart
and make it my home
I'll swim through your veins
like a fish out at sea 
and no fisherman's net
will ever catch me

-2013
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19 comments:

  1. MaryApril 12, 2015 at 1:25 PM

    Enjoyed this one, Torie. I'd say the one who is in love is a persistent one. (I smiled about the fisherman's net.)

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    1. TorieApril 13, 2015 at 8:03 AM

      Aw, thank you, Mary :) It's always a delight to read your comments!

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  2. Sherry Blue SkyApril 12, 2015 at 2:42 PM

    This is uplifting to read, made me smile.......especially your closing lines.

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    1. TorieApril 13, 2015 at 8:12 AM

      Thanks so much, Sherry! Glad to make you smile :)

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  3. Donna@LivingFromHappinessApril 12, 2015 at 4:02 PM

    I love these words of deep crazy love...'I want to hollow out your heart
    and make it my home'

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  4. dsnake1April 12, 2015 at 4:13 PM

    wow, simply breathtaking! :)

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  5. C.C.April 12, 2015 at 5:50 PM

    This is exquisitely romantic. Love it. I would like to follow you but can't find a way on your blog to do so other than by joining through google friends and I am not a part of google circles. Is there another way to follow you? If so then please let me know: consciouscacophony@gmail.com is my email address. Thanks :-)

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    1. TorieApril 13, 2015 at 11:11 AM

      Thanks for your lovely words, C.C. :) I'll have to look into other ways of following my blog and then I'll shoot you an email :)

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  6. brudbergApril 12, 2015 at 9:39 PM

    Wonderful how love can become symbiotic.. Wonderful.

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    1. TorieApril 13, 2015 at 12:19 PM

      Oh yeah, I love your thought, Bjorn! Thanks :)

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  7. NataĊĦekApril 12, 2015 at 10:56 PM

    passionate and lovely.. i love the part of melting into someone's bones :)

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  8. Jae RoseApril 13, 2015 at 5:59 AM

    I love the metaphors...love really does feel invincible and intoxicating

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    1. TorieApril 13, 2015 at 12:26 PM

      I agree :) Thanks for making a visit, Jae Rose. Always good to see you :)

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  9. Sumana RoyApril 13, 2015 at 8:15 AM

    warmth of love does melt one..sweetly passionate...

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  10. totomaiApril 13, 2015 at 4:02 PM

    That's a bold statement of love. Hope she grants your declaration :)

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