Thursday, June 20, 2013

Tiny Dweller

I'll be your tiny dweller
living in the hollow 
of your heart
I'll make believe 
I'm the only one
that's lived there
from the start
I'll fill in all the cracks
and smooth it out like clay
and then you'll see
no one else but me
has ever loved you
this way

-June 2013

14 comments:

  1. smiles....to be the one that is always been there...
    and being willing to repatch and fill in the places cracked...
    its a lovely thought...

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  2. You know, that feeling is nice, isn't it, when one feels that no one else has ever loved someone like that before....and if the thought comes to one, I think it is probably true. A lovely write.

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    1. Thanks, Mary. I think it's probably true, too ;)

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  3. beautiful Torrie..."I'll fill in all the cracks"..love this reassuring line :)

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  4. I LOVE this - love the idea of being the tiny dweller living in the hollow of his heart. So sweet, Torie.

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    1. Thanks, Sherry! This is one of my favorites ;)

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  5. Its such a beautiful poem, in a few words it has healed, touched and won the love of its life:)

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    1. Thank you, Vandana for your lovely comment and for making a visit :)

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  6. how do i say it, this is so lovely. the rhyming scheme is a joy to read.
    i guess this is about trusting love. give, and expect nothing in return. :)

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    1. Nice to see you, dsnake1 :) Thank you for making another visit :)

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