Sunday, August 24, 2014

Unraveling

I see the way
you dream
You've opened up
my eyes
My soul is bursting
with one hundred colors
for you
I see the light dance
in your eyes
I can use it
to watch you
unravel
You keep unraveling
before me
With each thread lost
I see more of your gold
more of your glow
I can feel my soul dancing
and it's dancing 
for you

-June 2014

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    1. Thank you for visiting again, Sumana :)

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  2. This is a lovely poem, Torie. One that is bursting with color, love, and tenderness. You came up with some very creative images for this one...love "With each thread lost I see more of your gold..." Always a treat to see your work in Poetry Jam!

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  3. the thought of unraveling in front of you...revealing more of themselves and their inner being...it is intimate...and very cool...the development of relationship...of friends and others...its cool...smiles.

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    1. Indeed it is! Thanks for visiting and for your comment, Brian :)

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  4. your words literally danced in this poem. i liked the flow of images and thoughts in this piece. :)

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    1. Thank you so much! Thanks for coming by for a visit :)

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  5. How lovely! We are inspiring each other, giving insight and positively influence throughout the life. ~ Thanks for stopping by :)x

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    1. Yes, I agree :) Thank you for making a visit!

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  6. Oh I love this - "my soul is bursting with one hundred colors" and "it's dancing for you". An awesome write!

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  7. Thank you so much, Sherry! Good to see you today :)

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