In the pit of despair is where
I find myself, again
after all these years
and all these dulled senses I have left
it's a never ending maze
left inside me
where can I go from here
into whose arms can I fall apart
break apart
into unrecognizable pieces
pieces of my existence
of my soul
I break apart so easily
so fragile I am...
I just want to feel whole again
-2010
"I break apart so easily
ReplyDeleteso fragile I am...
I just want to feel whole again"
You have really captured a feeling there, one I too have known at times.
...and also thanks very much for your visit over at my blog Out of My Ocean today, it was nice to see you again. :-)
I was just thinking why don't you join Poets United it is a community of people who like to write and read poetry and they are very nice and really welcoming too. Tell 'em I sent you. - Susannah :-)
The url is - http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/
and the page to join up and be put on the blogroll there is here - http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/p/poetry-forum.html
If you need any help with anything there is an email address on my Out of My Ocean blog - just get in touch. x
Thank you Susannah for all your kind words. I just might take you up on your offer for help! I'm going to check out the Poets United...sounds great!
ReplyDeleteThat's great. :-)
ReplyDeleteIf it looks a bit confusing let me know and I'll point you in the right direction.
Perhaps the easiest way to start would be to post a link to one of your poens at the weekly poetry pantry here - http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/2010/11/poetry-pantry-is-now-open-week-16.html
and then perhaps just say in the comments that you'd like to join as well and I am sure Robert Lloyd who runs the site will sort it out for you, he is very helpful. :-)